Thursday, December 2, 2010

  for my image of woman in lit class we read several amazing stories and poems that at the heart speak about the oppression and suppression of woman throughout history. Another central theme however is the idea that God and Christianity has taken away freedom from women. The concept is that woman should reclaim their Self with a capitol S. they should reclaim their sexuality and embrace their imaginations and sexuality with no bounds. Any boundary is a hindered to the "Self". This was very grievous because although it is terribly true that woman have and continue to be denied self expression , we should not however blame God for human wickedness. And to retaliate embrace not just creativity and imagination but embrace rebellion against God.Not realizing that true life, true identity is and freedom is found in knowing Christ. So i decided to write a response to the poem "Eve by Dorothy Livesay because it covers general themes we explored through the class. I pray God will heal our women and we can find solace and our desires rooted in his Truth.


'EVE' BY Dorothy Livesay

Eve
Beside the highway
at the motel door
              its roots
the last surviver of a pioner
                 orchard
miraculously      still
                bearing

A thud another apple falls
               I stop     and O
that scent, gnarled, ciderish
                with sun it
that woody pulp
                 for teeth and tongue
                 to bite and curl around
that spurting juice
                earth-sweet!
In fifty seconds, fifty summers sweep
              and shake me-
I an alive!      can stand
                up still
hoarding this apple in my hand.





Creative response to Eve p 595


Poison Apples
As you rush to reclaim
Everything you think
Is yours
Do you spill
With joy
Or are you hungry for more?
Are you sure your prize will keep you
Alive?
Is there something you do not know,
Feigning eyes?
About the fruit that grows grows
Sick
Deep
Out of your soul into hoarding palms?
And what if all the
Laws carved rough
In a slab of stone,
Were not to strike you,
Not to Leave you empty
scratched out and erased;
  
Oh no but instead to reveal
the richest of tastes?
you  will
Fall short.
You have;
Look at the scars on your knees and
Know more will come.
But friend,
To swallow
A healing cup filled with Grace-
Bought by a Lover’s clean blood
Purchased to clean you up­;
Oh------- the taste!
Enough to drop the poison apple,
Touching your lips.
Keep your Free hands open.
Let go to live let it go to
Live.





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